I had friends once,
But now no more.
For they left me alone,
When they walked out the door.
This is not the first time,
And i fear not the last.
For as they say,
"Time alway repeats the past."
I think about giving up life,
And choosing death.
But I cant bring myself,
To take my last breath.
Maybe this is a faze,
And it will past over.
But until then,
This nightmares not over. | |
regardless, yes, i agree with the content. life does suck.
Keep working on your poetry and it does not have to rhyme to be good, but this seems to be the perfect outlet for you, keep writing out your feelings as they come to you, sometimes that is the only way.
I sympathize with how you are feeling. Continue to inspire
You should read the gravestone of John Keats, don't be a name " writ in water". I'd like for you, if you can, to read " island" by Langston Hughes, it's a beautiful poem by a beautiful writer. You may find parallels.
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